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Alessandro Spasiano
Hello my name is alessandro, I’m 23 and I’m a student of Human Resource Management. My course is very interesting, with different subject like statistic, economics, law (so boring), organizational behaviour and, of course, management. The main topic of this master degree is how to motivate workers, how to create a familiar environment in a firm. Moreover to take care of a person, because the goal of a company is not only to make money, but also to create something important for the people. I hope someone will corrects my mistakes.
2020년 11월 17일 오후 6:56
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Hello, my name is Alessandro, I’m 23 years old, and I’m studying Human Resource Management. My coursework is very interesting, with different subjects like statistics, economics, law (so boring!), organizational behaviour, and, of course, management. The twin focus of this master's degree is not only how to best motivate a firm's workers, but also how to create a more productive environment within it. Moreover, enabling a company's management to recognize, and to properly utilize its employees often becomes a “win-win” situation, as the goal of a company should naturally be to make money, as well as to adequately reward the workers who allowed it to happen (I hope someone will correct my mistakes).
Hi, Alessandro. Good job! Whatever changes I made were merely to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears, to clarify your ideas, and for ease of reading. My sincerest apologies if I have misinterpreted. I hope that this helps you.
2020년 11월 18일
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Hello my name is Alessandro, I’m 23 and I’m a student of Human Resource Management. This course is very interesting with different subjects like statistics, economics, law (so boring), organizational behaviour, and of course, management. The main topics of this master degree are: how to motivate workers, and how to create a familiar environment in a firm. Moreover to take care of a person, because the goal of a company is not only to make money, but also to create something important for the people. I hope someone will corrects my mistakes.
2020년 11월 17일
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