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Today my sister came back from Korea.She
bought some Souvenirs for my family!There are Korean cosmetics, spicy foods and so on.
I was very happy!
2025년 5월 8일 오후 10:47
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Today, my sister came back from Korea. She bought some souvenirs for our family! There were Korean cosmetics, spicy foods, and more. I was very happy!
Alternative Version:
My sister returned from Korea today and brought back some souvenirs for the family—Korean cosmetics, spicy snacks, and other fun things. I was so happy!
Short Tip: Use “souvenirs” (not capitalized) and connect short, related sentences for a smoother flow. Saying “brought back” sounds more natural than “bought” in this context. Advice on Natural Flow of English: Try linking sentences with “and” or “so” to avoid choppy rhythm. Also, include small details (like "spicy snacks" or "fun things") to make your writing sound more vivid and natural.
2025년 5월 12일 오후 1:38
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Today my sister came back from Korea.She bought some Souvenirs for my
family!There are Korean cosmetics, spicy foods and so on. I was very happy!
I envy Korean souvenirs!!
2025년 5월 9일 오전 5:22
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Today my sister came back from Korea.She bought some Souvenirs for my
family!There were Korean cosmetics, spicy foods and so on. I was very happy!
I’m glad your sister came back,your english is really good!! ( :
2025년 5월 8일 오후 11:59
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