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I went to Christmas Market in Tokyo with my friend. I ate delicious food, and I enjoyed seeing beautiful scenery. I got a feel for Christmas. Around this time of the year, I listen to Christmas songs. I like this season.
2023년 12월 13일 오후 2:10
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I went to Christmas Market in Tokyo with my friend. I ate delicious food, and I
enjoyed seeing beautiful scenery. I got a feel for Christmas. Around this time
of the year, I listen to Christmas songs. I like this season.
2023년 12월 13일
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I went to the Christmas Market in Tokyo with my friend. I ate delicious food, and I enjoyed seeing beautiful scenery. I love Christmas, around this time of the year, I listen to Christmas songs. I like this season.
To have a feel for something means to be able to understand it instinctively without explanations or anything. Good job, keep it up.
2023년 12월 13일
I went to the Christmas Market in Tokyo with my friend. I ate delicious food, and I enjoyed seeing beautiful scenery. I got a feel for Christmas. Around this time of the year, I listen to Christmas songs. I like this season.
*You could improve this by using relative pronouns and more complex sentence structures, e.g. I went to the Christmas Market in Tokyo with my friend where I ate delicious food and enjoyed seeing beautiful scenery.
2023년 12월 14일
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