The Tim じぁん!!!
It's a beautiful sunny day today. However, last night, when my MeeMaw visited, she complained a lot to my dad about my great grandma. Lately, their relationship hasn't been the best. My great grandma has been rather cranky and irritable. For instance, one day she started crying for no apparent reason, and when my MeeMaw asked her about it, she mentioned that she was reminiscing the past. Really? On another occasion, she abruptly announced that she was going to become a vegan, claiming that eating meat was draining the life out of her. Perhaps it would be a good idea to take her to Disneyland to cheer her up.
2023년 12월 28일 오전 10:08
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It's a beautiful sunny day today. However, (does last night affect the weather today?) last night, when my MeeMaw visited, she complained a lot to my dad about my great grandma. Lately, their relationship hasn't been the best. My great grandma has been rather cranky and irritable. For instance, one day she started crying for no apparent reason, and when my MeeMaw asked her about it, she mentioned that she was reminiscing about the past. (To reminisce means to think about the past so you don’t really need to add it) Really? On another occasion, she abruptly announced that she was going to become a vegan, claiming that eating meat was draining the life out of her. Perhaps it would be a good idea to take her to Disneyland to cheer her up.
Maybe it would!
2023년 12월 28일
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