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Today is Omisoka! December 31, the final day of the year, is called Omisoka in Japan. There are a lot of customs in Japan. Many Japanese people eat “toshikoshi soba”and watch “kohaku uta gassen” with their family. I love this time when we gather as my family and spend time together. There are many wonderful meetings and memories in this year. I had an unforgettable year. Thank you for memories in 2023.
2023년 12월 31일 오후 1:41
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Today is Omisoka! December 31, the final day of the year, is called Omisoka in
Japan. There are a lot of customs in Japan. Many Japanese people eat “toshikoshi
soba”and watch “kohaku uta gassen” with their family. I love this time when we
gather as my family and spend time together. There are many wonderful meetings
and memories in this year. I had an unforgettable year. Thank you for memories
in 2023.
2024년 1월 1일
Today is Omisoka! December 31, the final day of the year, is called Omisoka in Japan. There are a lot of customs in Japan. Many Japanese people eat “toshikoshi soba”and watch “kohaku uta gassen” with their families. I love this time of year because we all gather as a family and spend time together. There was a lot of wonderful meetings and memories of this year. I had an unforgettable and fantastic year. Thank you for everything (year 2023).
2024년 1월 1일
Today is Omisoka! December 31, the final day of the year, is called Omisoka in Japan. There are a lot of customs in Japan. Many Japanese people eat “toshikoshi soba” and watch “kohaku uta gassen” with their family. I love this time where we gather as family and spend time together. There are many wonderful meetings and memories this year. I had an unforgettable year. Thank you for the memories of 2023.
The sentence "There are many wonderful meetings and memories this year" indicates that the meetings/memories occur at the Omisoka celebrations. If you mean to say that you are reflecting on the memories of 2023, you can say "There were many wonderful meetings and memories this year." While the last corrected sentence "Thank you for the memories of 2023" is grammatically right, "Thank you for all the memories of 2023" and "Thank you for all the memories made in 2023" sound more natural. Awesome job overall!
2023년 12월 31일
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