Akram Alwajih
I am writing to apply for position accounter in your institutional. With 10 years of experiences in this area and Great records of Financial management operations , I am confident in my abilities will contribute in Your team. In my previous role as financial analyst at Yemen company , I have implemented successfully measures to save cost and simplified financial Process of report Generation . I am adept at financial data analysis, identify a tend and provide strategic recommendations to drive business growth . I will be appreciated for opportunity to discuss how my skills and experiences align with your institutional's objectives. Thank you for consideration my application "
2024년 1월 4일 오후 5:01
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I am writing to apply for position accounter in your institutional. With 10 years of experiences in this area and Great records of Financial management operations , I am confident in my abilities will contribute in Your team. In my previous role as financial analyst at Yemen company , I have implemented successfully measures to save cost and simplified financial Process of report Generation . I am adept at financial data analysis, identify a tend and provide strategic recommendations to drive business growth . I will be appreciated for opportunity to discuss how my skills and experiences align with your institutional's objectives. Thank you for consideration my application "In my previous role as a financial analyst at a Yemen company , I successfully implemented measures to save cost and simplified Generating financial reports. I am adept at analysing financial data, identifying trends and provide strategic recommendations to drive business growth . I will appreciate you to give me the opportunity to discuss how my skills and experience align with your institutional objectives. Thank you for considering my application. Sincerenly, Akram Alwajih
2024년 1월 4일
I am writing to apply for a position as accountant(?) in your organization (or company). With already 10 years of experience in this area and [Great records of Financial management operations - not sure what you mean by this (Great records...)], I believe that that my skills could prove to be of value to your team. In my previous role as financial analyst at a Yemeni [the adjective is "Yemeni"] company, I successfully implemented cost saving measures and simplified the process of generating financial reports . I am adept at delivering financial data analyses, trend identifications, and strategic recommendations aimed at furthering business growth . I would very much appreciate an opportunity to discuss how my skills and experiences might align with your objectives. I thank you for your consideration.
I think it is better to soften your confidence a bit. That is why I use terms like "believe", "could prove", "might align". Personally, I find too much confidence to suggest a lack of humility: "I am confident in my abilities", etc. A little of that is fine, but you also need to permit them to make such judgements themselves rather than making them yourself.
2024년 1월 6일
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