Xin
When I was young, my roommate recommended Anime: NANA, which is based on the story of two women with the same name. They are like two sides of one person. I especially like the use of the theme song "rose". When I was darkness at that time 震えてる唇 部屋の片隅で I cry もがけばもがくほど 突き刺さるこの傷 破られた約束 hurt me Nobody can save me 神様ひとつだけ 止めて裂くような my love I need your love. I'm a broken rose. 舞散る悲しみ your song 居場所ない 孤独な my life I need your love. I'm a broken rose. My roommate looked like Nana Osaki. Short hair, cool, smoked “Seven Stars” cigarette. Then she told me the sad story, why did she wear and act like that. Because her father treated her very bad, her mother just listened to her father. she had no one to rely on, so she dressed in neutral style. Ten years of life and death, not thinking, unforgettable.
2022년 7월 21일 오후 4:09
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When I was young, my roommate recommended the Anime: NANA (to me) , which is based on the story of two women with the same name. They are like two sides of one person. I especially like the use of the theme song "Rose". Here is a segment of the song lyrics : "When I was darkness at that time 震えてる唇 部屋の片隅で I cry もがけばもがくほど 突き刺さるこの傷 破られた約束 hurt me Nobody can save me 神様ひとつだけ 止めて裂くような my love I need your love. I'm a broken rose. 舞散る悲しみ your song 居場所ない 孤独な my life I need your love. I'm a broken rose. " My roommate looked like Nana Osaki. She had short hair, looked cool, smoked “Seven Stars” cigarette. Then she told me the sad story of why did she dressed and acted like that. It is because her father treated her very badly and her mother just listened to her father. She had no one to rely on, So she dressed in neutral style. Ten years of life and death, not thinking, unforgettable.
Hi Xin. I'm guessing that the middle part of your essay is a segment of the song lyrics? If so, you can introduce it to the reader and enclose the actual lyrics in quotes ("...lyrics here..."). This way the reader knows where is the start of the lyrics, where it ends and where your own writing resumes.
2022년 7월 23일
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언어 구사 능력
중국어(북경어), 중국어(광동어), 영어, 독일어, 이탈리아어, 일본어, 티베트어
학습 언어
중국어(광동어), 영어, 독일어, 이탈리아어, 일본어, 티베트어