Towa
Hello,every one. Today,I cut my hair at yesterday and Look forward to be told that you are so cool from friend but, just be said nothing. I feel a little bit sad.
2025년 5월 19일 오전 3:23
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Hello, everyone. Today, I cut my hair and I was looking forward to being told that I am so cool from my friend but, they just said nothing. I feel a little bit sad.
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2025년 5월 19일 오후 7:45
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