It's sunny today. I am over the moon because my mom signed me up for a singing club. There, professional singers will be mentoring me to help me achieve my dream of becoming a singer. This has been a longing of mine for years. After finally persuading Dad, they (it’s pretty clear this means your parents) spent a pretty penny on the tuition. Regardless of the hefty cost, I am confident that I will shine brightly (adverb not adjective) and become a star!

It's sunny today. I am over the moon because my mom signed me up for a singing club. There, professional singers will mentor me to help me achieve my dream of becoming one too. This has been a longing of mine for years. After finally persuading Dad, my parents spent a pretty penny on the tuition. Regardless of the hefty cost, I am confident that I will shine bright and become a star!