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I dont have pet.emmm my parents don't like animal so my family not pet. but I like animal.I like cat,is so cute,my sister have many cat,I like to my sister home,I think have pets in future.It is a cat color is orange.
2022년 5월 5일 오전 6:00
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I don't have a pet. My parents don't like animals so my family does not have pets. However, I like animals such as cats they are so cute, and my sister has many cats. I like my sister's home, I think of having pets in future, an orange cat.
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2022년 5월 5일
I don't have pets.emmm my parents don't like animals, so my family have not pets. But I
like animals.I like cat,which is so cute.my sister has many cats.I like to go to my sister's
home.I want to have an orange cat in future.
2022년 5월 5일
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