My family is a small family. There are three members in my family: my husband, my son and me. My husband is the bread maker of our family. He earns the living to support our daily life. My son is a

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My family is a small family. There are three members in my family: my husband, my son and me. My husband is the bread maker of our family. He earns the living to support our daily life. My son is a 4-year-old kindergarten children. And I am a housewife and a part-time acupuncturist.

2021년 2월 6일 오전 7:37

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My family is a small. There are three members in my family: my husband, my son and me. My husband is the bread maker of our family. He earns the living to support our daily life. My son is a 4-year-old kindergarten child. I am a housewife and a part-time acupuncturist.

Crystal, this is very good. Well done. For explanation: Children is plural (meaning many or few children) so "4-year-old kindergarten child" is the correct phrase.

2021년 2월 6일

My family is a small family. There are three members in my family: my husband, my son and me. My husband is the bread maker of our family. He earns the living to support our daily life. My son is a 4-year-old kindergarten student. And I am a housewife and a part-time acupuncturist.

My only correction is "kindergarten student" instead of "kindergarten children". The sentence "There are three members in my family" sounds odd, but it is technically correct. You can also say "There are three people in my family"

2021년 2월 6일

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