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José Arturo Vergara
I used to dance every single day in the shower during my childhood but besides all that, hanging out with my parents, cousins and relatives it’s something incomparable and I won’t ever forget those gorgeous memories. Best Joshep
2021년 3월 19일 오후 3:15
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I used to dance every single day in the shower during my childhood but besides all that, hanging out with my parents, cousins and relatives it’s something incomparable and I won’t ever forget those gorgeous memories. Best Joshep
Instead of "besides all that" (since you only mentioned one thing), it would be better to say either "Besides that, I also enjoyed...." or make two sentences : " my childhood. Besides that, I enjoyed...." End the next sentence with ..relatives. THESE THINGS are incomparable..."
2021년 3월 19일
I used to dance every single day in the shower during my childhood but besides
all that, hanging out with my parents, cousins and relatives it’s something
incomparable and I won’t ever forget those breathtaking memories. Best Joshep
2021년 3월 19일
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