I believe that yoga has good benefits for body and mind, practicing it can be beneficial for our lifestyle.

Francisco José

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I believe that yoga has good benefits for body and mind; practicing it can be beneficial for our lifestyle.

Very good. The only change I made was to use a semicolon instead of a comma (a period or a dash would also be fine there).

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