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Francisco José
I believe that yoga has good benefits for body and mind, practicing it can be beneficial for our lifestyle.
2021년 3월 21일 오전 9:07
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I believe that yoga has good benefits for body and mind; practicing it can be beneficial for our lifestyle.
Very good. The only change I made was to use a semicolon instead of a comma (a period or a dash would also be fine there).
2021년 3월 22일
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