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The evening sun shines brightly, dyeing the city orange. After finishing today's work with my friends.
I looked at the window and saw the changing view. (It means, we ride in a car. and friend drives a car.)
2023년 12월 29일 오후 2:22
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The evening sun shines brightly, dyeing the city orange. After finishing today's work with my friends. [This is not a sentence. You have three choices: (1) attach it to the previous sentence, (2) attach it to the next sentence, or (3) give it a verb.]
I looked out the window at the changing view. (We are riding in a car with a friend driving.)
2023년 12월 30일
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The evening sun shines brightly, dyeing the city orange, after finishing today's work with my friends.
I looked out the window and saw the changing view. (I mean, we ride in a car, and a friend is driving the car.)
Since you included "after," the phrase "after finishing today's work with my friends" cannot be a full sentence on its own. Looked "at" means you are viewing the object, such as the window. Looked "out" means you are looking through the window and at the things behind it, like the scenery or view. Nice job!
2023년 12월 29일
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