Karen
“The graph illustrates how much energy American consumed by 6 kinds of fuels from 1980 to 2002” I wonder if there are any grammatical mistakes in the sentence, and if there are mistakes, please correct for me. THANKS!
2024년 3월 10일 오전 9:44
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A straightforward alternative: The graph shows American energy consumption from 6 fuel sources between 1980 and 2002.
2024년 3월 11일
Hi Americans (because you are talking about the people and not the country as a whole) 6 types of fuel (no s on fuel. 6 types shows is that there are many.)
2024년 3월 10일
Don't worrier about mistakes
2024년 3월 10일
It is a poor sentence because it is difficult to determine what word is modified by the phrase "by 6 kinds of fuel". My best guess is that it is trying to be an adverbial phrase and that it is intended to modify the verb "illustrates". I don't think the sentence can be easily repaired. It needs to be entirely rewritten. "The graph breaks down by fuel type the quantity of energy Americans consumed between 1980 and 2002."
2024년 3월 10일
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