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His utter dejection, his revulsion, it all disappeared as soon as he saw her. And after exchanging a few words, he experienced sheer bliss. She had forgiven him.
Practicing super cool advance adjectives!
2023년 2월 24일 오후 7:34
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His utter dejection, his revulsion - it all disappeared as soon as he saw her. And, after exchanging a few words, he experienced sheer bliss. She had forgiven him!
Practicing super cool advanced adjectives!
I added a dash, a comma, and an exclamation point!
2023년 2월 25일
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His utter dejection, his revulsion, it all disappeared as soon as he saw her. And after exchanging a few words, he experienced sheer bliss. She had forgiven him.
Practicing super cool advanced adjectives!
2023년 2월 24일
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