Teenagers should be treated according to their age and not as adults. However, this question is complicated if we consider the severity of the crime committed. We accept that justice is well given onl

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Eva Bolli

Teenagers should be treated according to their age and not as adults. However, this question is complicated if we consider the severity of the crime committed. We accept that justice is well given only when the punishment is as severe as the crime committed… Therefore, to be morally righteous when a teenager commits murder or other major crimes, there should be a punishment that fits those crimes.

2023년 3월 6일 오후 10:35

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Teenagers should be treated according to their age and not as adults. However, this question is complicated if we consider the severity of the crime committed. We accept that justice is served only when the punishment is as severe as the crime committed… Therefore, to be morally righteous when a teenager commits murder or other major crimes, there should be a punishment that fits those crimes.

This sounds great! The only change I would make would be to change "well given" to "served".

2023년 3월 7일

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