Saddam Hussain
I am a pakistani and we have very delicious food here. Alot of foreigner coming here from for visiting and specially for eating. I ate fish. That's very delicious dish here in Pakistan because in restaurants we have very expert that can cook fish very well.
2021년 3월 5일 오전 8:57
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I am pakistani and we have lots of very delicious food here. A lot of foreigners come here to visit especially for the food. I eat fish which is really delicious here in Pakistan because in restaurants we have expert chefs that can cook fish very well.
Nice writing, very easy to understand. In general, I recommend using 'really' more than 'very' because it is more commonly used.
2021년 3월 5일
I am a Pakistani and we have very delicious food here. A lot of foreignerS comE here to visit and especially TO EAT. I EAT fish. That's A very delicious dish here in Pakistan because in restaurants we have expertS that can cook fish very well.
2021년 3월 5일
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