Community is not society. With the development of urbanization in China, more and more communities appeared, which become the new parts of our society. However, community is more than society. Commu

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Sherman

Community is not society. With the development of urbanization in China, more and more communities appeared, which become the new parts of our society. However, community is more than society. Community should not only have geographical and spatial proximity, but also have direct interaction between people. In this case, business behavior is increasingly changing to the community, such as community shopping, express delivery, life services, etc. Taobao, Jingdong, meituan and other Internet giants are investing in this field.

2021년 3월 6일 오전 3:13

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Community is not society. With the development of urbanization in China, more and more communities appeared, which is becoming a new part of our society. A community however, is more than society. A community should not only feature geographical and spatial proximity, but also direct interaction between people. In this case, business behavior is increasingly adapting to the community with such things as community shopping, express delivery, life services, etc. Taobao, Jingdong, meituan and other Internet giants are investing in this field.

When you wrote "have" instead of "feature," it was grammatically correct, but feature is a much better word. Very well done, Sherman!

2021년 3월 6일

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