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I am going to go Tokyo Disneyland during what we call Golden Week with my friends. GW is a succession of holidays from the end of April to the beginning of May. This year is nine days off in a row. Have fun on your holiday!
2023년 4월 28일 오전 5:32
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I am going to go to Tokyo Disneyland during what we call Golden Week with my friends. GW is a succession of holidays from the end of April to the beginning of May. This year is/we have nine days off in a row. Have fun on your holiday!
Almost perfect really. You should know that my style it to change your language only when it is absolutely necessary. I don't necessarily disagree with other corrections, but I do try to maintain your own language when I can. I think you did a very good job.
2023년 4월 28일
I'll be going to Tokyo Disneyland during what we call Golden Week with my friends. GW is a succession of holidays from the end of April to the beginning of May. This year it'll be nine days off in a row. Happy holidays!
2023년 4월 28일
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