Mari Kim
Question) Tell me about your parents? My answer) What I did like about my parents was that they allowed me to be myself. They didn't care what I wore to school or how I cut my hair. They pretty much left me alone, and I liked that. Sometimes they were restrict but they didn't try to impose their way of thinking on me, allowing me to make choices for myself. I appreciate it. Could you please make my writing sound more like a native speaker? Thank you for your time and your help.
2021년 10월 21일 오전 2:29
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"What I liked about my parents was that they allowed me to be myself. They didn't care what I wore to school or how I did/ cut my hair. They pretty much left me alone/ they left me alone most of the time and I liked it. They were strict sometimes but never tried to impose their way of thinking on me, allowing me to make my own choice and I appreciated that". Your paragraph is in past tense and I kept it that way when I wrote my own version or rather how a native speaker would say it.
2021년 10월 21일
Other than that it is really good
2021년 10월 21일
The word you are looking for is strict not restrict and the last phrase should be I appreciated it
2021년 10월 21일
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