영어 강사 찾기
aii
Today and yesterday, I had a part-time job. I’m very tired. I have to do my homework. I have three reports, and a normal homework.But maybe I can’t. I’m too sleepy now… I’ll do my homework tomorrow night. In this Sunday, I’m going to go to the concert. It’s a joint concert, so I can see many artists! I have to enjoy the concert, so I have to finish my homework!
2025년 7월 2일 오후 2:04
교정 · 1
Today and yesterday, I had a part-time job. I’m very tired. I have to do my
homework. I have three reports, and a normal homework.But maybe I can’t. I’m too
sleepy now… I’ll do my homework tomorrow night. In this Sunday, I’m going to go
to the concert. It’s a joint concert, so I can see many artists! I have to enjoy
the concert, so I have to finish my homework!
I worked a part-time job yesterday and today, so I’m very tired. I still have to do my homework, three reports and some regular assignments but I’m too sleepy right now. Maybe I won’t be able to finish it tonight. I’ll probably do it tomorrow evening instead.
This Sunday, I’m going to a joint concert where I can see many different artists! I really want to enjoy the concert, so I need to make sure I finish my homework beforehand.
P.S a lot of my students over use the ellipsis (...)
It should be used to show something has been left out, indicate a pause or create suspense.
I wouldn't recommend it here.
2025년 7월 2일 오후 3:04
더 빨리 진행하고 싶나요?
이 학습 커뮤니티에 참여하고 무료로 연습해보세요!