Jesús Antonio Félix
I do many things to reduce stress such as working out, hanging out with my friends, playing guitar, etc. I think We definitely need to have other activities besides our jobs because if we just go to work and then home everyday without any new experience, It is likely we could get to the point of feeling depressed, at the end of the day as a famous phrase says "you only live once"".
2023년 3월 26일 오전 1:58
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I do many things to reduce stress such as working out, hanging out with my friends, playing guitar, etc. I think we definitely need to have other activities besides our jobs, because if we just go to work and then home every day without any new experience(s), it is likely we will come to the point of feeling depressed, at the end of the day as* a famous phrase goes, "you only live once".
* I didn't know how to interpret it when you wrote "at the end of the day". Were you describing when we might start feeling depressed---at what time of day? Or were you using the English idiom, "At the end of the day, ...." which means something like, "To sum up all this, ...". You should correct your punctuation according to what your intended meaning was.
2023년 3월 26일
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커뮤니티 가이드라인을 위반한 콘텐츠입니다.
2023년 3월 26일
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