Hello, everyone! My favorite food is sushi.🍣 I especially like salmon. When I was a junior high school student, I ate sushi with my family every Sunday. My father company was closed on Sunday, so we

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Hello, everyone! My favorite food is sushi.🍣 I especially like salmon. When I was a junior high school student, I ate sushi with my family every Sunday. My father company was closed on Sunday, so we ate it with my family. Also, I ate it with my friend yesterday. I ate 12 dishes, so I was full. I like Sushiro because it is delicious and cheap. If I made any mistakes, please correct them.

2021년 6월 18일 오후 1:20

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Good job Mio! Just a simple change. Father should be father's.

2021년 6월 18일

Hello, everyone! My favorite food is sushi.🍣 I especially like salmon. When I was a junior high school student, I ate sushi with my family every Sunday. My father's company was closed on Sunday, so we ate it with my family. Also, I ate it with my friend yesterday. I ate 12 dishes, so I was full. I like Sushiro because it is delicious and cheap. If I made any mistakes, please correct them.

2021년 6월 18일

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