Jesús Rubiano
First we meet with neighbors and eat sweet rice, smoked meat and potatoes then stay at home with family waiting for the midnight, finally we go to the dancing until the dawn.
2021년 6월 11일 오전 2:14
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First we meet with our neighbors and eat sweet rice, smoked meat and potatoes. We then stay at home with the family waiting for midnight. Finally, we go out dancing until dawn.
Great! A few small changes to make it sound natural, but it was perfectly understandable. In England we would spell vecinos as "neighbours" with a u, but without the u is the correct spelling in the United States.
2021년 6월 11일
First, we would meet up with our neighbors and eat some sweet rice, smoked meat, and potatoes. Then,
we would go home to family and wait for midnight to come around. Finally, we would go out dancing
until dawn.
Very good! I changed it a bit to make it more more fitting to how people would respond to that question, but the general meaning should be the same :)
2021년 6월 11일
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