あいな
Today,I get up at nineo’clock.Because,I went to bed at two o’clock. It was not good thing.But, be getting better at two o'clock.I want to correct lifestyle.Little by little,I want to change lifestyle.And at home,I eat snack a long time.I want to go to shopping tomorow and I want to walk. I will do my best tomorrow.
2021년 6월 12일 오전 8:00
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Today, I woke up at nine o’clock. Because, I went to bed at two o’clock. It was not a good thing. But, it was getting better by two o'clock. I want to correct my lifestyle. Little by little, I want to change my lifestyle. And at home, I ate snacks for a
long time. I want to go to shopping tomorow and I want to walk. I will do my best
tomorrow.
Good events' sequence.
it'd be good to mention the time with the moment of the day for a better understanding.
E.g. it was getting better that afternoon by 2 o'clock.
2021년 6월 12일
Today, I get up at nine o’clock, because I went to bed at two o’clock. It is not a good thing, and I want to correct this lifestyle. Little by little, I want to change this lifestyle. And at home, I eat snacks for a long time. I want to go to shopping tomorrow and I want to walk. I will do my best tomorrow.
All the best changing your lifestyle for the better!
2021년 6월 12일
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