Ami
Recently, my hobby is listening to old songs! I listen to the music that my parents used to listen to. I especially love the songs of Akina Nakamori, an old Japanese idol! Her song is cool! I became a fan of her😍 Music has been loved for generations.
2021년 6월 13일 오전 10:51
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Recently, my hobby is listening to old songs! I listen to the music that my parents used to listen to. I especially love the songs of Akina Nakamori, an old Japanese idol! Her songs are cool! I became a fan of her😍 Music has been loved for generations.
Glad you found some music you like!
2021년 6월 14일
Recently my hobby became listening to old songs! I now listen to the (same kind of) music that my parents used to listen to. I especially love the songs of Akina Nakamori, an old* Japanese idol**! Her songs are (so) cool! I became a (real) fan of her😍 (Her) music has (already) been loved for generations. * "an old Japanese idol" sounds a bit rude to my ear. Maybe rephrase it as "a Japanese idol of the 80ies", "a seasoned Japanese idol", "a well known Japanese idol". ** Alternative words for "idol" are for example: "(female) singer", "vocalist (of a band)".
Very nice! Keep it going!
2021년 6월 13일
Recently, my hobby is listening to old songs! I listen to the music that my parents used to listen to. I especially love the songs of Akina Nakamori, an old Japanese idol! Her songs are cool! I became a fan of hers😍 Her music has been loved for generations.
2021년 6월 13일
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