Louis Wong
I have a small family, there are three members, my wife, my daughter and me. My daughter is five years old, currently she is in a kindergarten. Everyday is a happy day to her, because in the kindergarten it has so many friends she can play with, there also no homework in the kindergarten. My beautiful wife, she took care our daughter very well, and we are planning having the second child in the future. I love my family.
2021년 6월 13일 오후 6:17
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I have a small family. There are three members, my wife, my daughter and me. My daughter is five years old and currently she is in kindergarten. Everyday is a happy day for her, because in the kindergarten she has many friends that she can play with. There is also no homework in the kindergarten. My beautiful wife, takes care of our daughter very well and we are planning to have a second child in the future. I love my family.
2021년 6월 14일
I have a small family. There are three members — my wife, my daughter and me. My
daughter is five years old, and she is currently in kindergarten. Everyday is a happy day for her because in the kindergarten, she has many friends she can play with. There is also no homework in the kindergarten. My beautiful wife takes care our daughter very well, and we are planning on having a second child in the future. I love my family.
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2021년 6월 13일
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