Kiko
2021/6/15 Recently, I am often said "You should do your job more carefully." . It is my weakness to do jobs incomplete. I thought I understood it. However, My teachers advice enable me to recognize I didn't understand actually. At present, strict teachers have been taught me. I hope I learn anything in their classes, and grow up as a human!
2021년 6월 15일 오후 2:42
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2021/6/15 Recently I have been repeatedly told, "You should do your job more carefully." It is my weakness to do jobs incompletely. I thought I understood it, however my teacher's advice enabled me to recognize that I actually didn't. At present, strict teachers have taught me well. I hope I continue to learn in their classes and grow as a human!
I wasn't quite sure what you meant by "At present, strict teachers have been taught me" so the way I edited it might not be a little off. I hope this helps!
2021년 6월 15일
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