Fatema Fatema
The most popular sport in my country is cricket, but football(soccer) is popular too. The young generation enjoys watching and playing cricket and football in my country. we are proud of our cricket and football team. They are inspiring our next generation how to build our country's popularity in World.
2021년 6월 16일 오후 2:49
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The most popular sport in my country is cricket, but football(soccer) is popular too. The young generation enjoys watching and playing cricket and football in my country. we are proud of our cricket and football team. They are inspiring our next generation how to build our country's popularity in World.
in my country the most popular sports are Cricket and Football. you know Shakib Al Hasan is the best cricketer
2021년 6월 16일
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The most popular sport in my country is cricket, but football (soccer) is popular too. The young generation enjoy watching and playing cricket “as well as” (2) football in my country. we are proud of our cricket and football team (1). They are inspiring future generations (3) which helps to (4) build our country's popularity in World.
1. Is this one team only? Like the national team? 2. Using and and isn’t flexible 3. Better to say future generations on 4. What it does? Not bad sentences I provided a few minor changes, a nice point about your country :)
2021년 6월 16일
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