Today, I made a presentation script and materials about Taiwan. It’s for a presentation in my presentation class. I visited for the first time before, everything I felt the atmosphere of the streets a

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Today, I made a presentation script and materials about Taiwan. It’s for a presentation in my presentation class. I visited for the first time before, everything I felt the atmosphere of the streets and smells was new to me. The food was also perfect, and I have had such good memories. Every time I look at the photos, I feel like going back again! I definitely want to do that someday.

2025년 6월 28일 오후 11:53

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Today, I prepared a presentation script and materials about Taiwan. It’s for my presentation class. It was my first time visiting, everything felt new to me from the atmosphere in the streets, and the scent around me it was all new to me. The food was also perfect, and I made such good memories. Every time I look at the photos, I feel like going back again! I definitely want to do that again someday.

Your word order arrangement needs some work. And the remember to be aware of the correct tenses when telling your story.

2025년 6월 29일 오전 6:05

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