yuri
When I was a child, my father often asked me to make tamago-yaki which is a Japanese side dish and similar to an omelette. He always said that tamago-yaki I made was the best ever. I forgot this memory until I saw this topic. I’m gonna make tamago-yaki for him when I go to my parents house next time.
2021년 1월 24일 오후 2:02
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When I was a child, my father often asked me to make tamago-yaki which is a Japanese side dish and similar to an omelette. He always said that tamago-yaki I made was the best ever. I had forgotten this memory until I saw this topic. I’m gonna make tamago-yaki for him next time I go to my parents’ house
2021년 1월 24일
When I was a child, my father often asked me to make tamago-yaki which is a Japanese side dish and similar to an omelette. He always said that tamago-yaki I made was the best ever. I forgot this memory until I saw this topic. I’m gonna make tamago-yaki for him next time that I go to my parents' house.
That was pretty much perfect! 'Next time' can used as a conjunction like when, so that's the only change that I would make :)
2021년 1월 24일
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