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Alice Lan
Oct 31st, 2020
The process of chocolate production is complicate. Chocolate is makes by cacao tree. Usually the tree is grows in S. America, Africa, and Indonesia. First, people will remove the red part while the cacao tree is ripe in the specific time. They put all the white cocoa beans are spread in the sun to dry. After the white cocoa beans were dry, it will be pack in the large sacks, which ready to transport by train or send to factory. The employees of the factory will roast the beans for a while by machine after they arrived to factory. The bean will be takes out after they has cooled. In the last step, the outer shell of the bean will remove and crush, then press its inner part liquid in the machine becomes to chocolate.
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Oct 31st, 2020
The process of chocolate production is complicated. Chocolate is
made by cocoa tree. Usually , the tree grows in S. America, Africa, and
Indonesia. Firstly, people remove the red part when the cacao bean is ripened
at the specific time. They spread all the white cocoa beans in the sun
to dry. After the white cocoa beans get dried, they will be packed in the large
sacks, which then are ready to transport by train and send to factory . The employees of
the factory will roast the beans for a while with the help of machine , after they reached
factory. The beans will be taken out after they cool down. In the last step, the
outer shell of the beans will be removed and crushed, then keep them under some pressure, their inner part will extract liquid
in the machine which results into chocolate.
2020년 10월 31일
Oct 31st, 2020 The process of chocolate production is complicated. Chocolate is
made by the cacao tree. Usually, these trees grow in S. America, Africa, and
Indonesia. First, people remove the red part while the cacao tree is ripe
at a specific time. They put all the white cocoa beans in the sun
to dry. After the white cocoa beans have dried, they are packed in large
sacks, which are ready to be transported by train or sent to a factory. The employees of
the factory roast the beans for a while by machine after they have arrived at the
factory. The beans are taken out after they have cooled. In the last step, the
outer shell of the bean is removed and crushed, then when its inner liquid part is pressed in the machine, it becomes chocolate.
Good writing! Just be careful with the passive voice: to be + past participle.
(If this is for IELTS, we usually use the present simple passive instead of future passive for processes.)
2020년 10월 31일
Oct 31st, 2020 The process of chocolate production is complicated. Chocolate is
made from cocoa beans, the dried seeds of the cacao tree. Usually the cocoa trees are grown in South America, Africa, and
Indonesia. First, people remove the red part of the cocoa bean when it is ripe. Then they spread the white cleaned cocoa beans in the sun
to dry. After the white cocoa beans are dry, they are packed in the large sacks and transported to the factory. After receiving the dried beans, the factory employees roast the beans in the special machine for quite a long time. Then the roasted beans are cooled and the outer shell of the bean is removed and crushed. Lastly, the bean’s inner part is liquified in the machine to becomes chocolate.
2020년 10월 31일
Oct 31st, 2020 The process of chocolate production is complicate. Chocolate is
makes by cacao tree. Usually the tree is grows in S. America, Africa, and
Indonesia. First, people will remove the red part while the cacao tree is ripe
in the specific time. They put all the white cocoa beans are spread in the sun
to dry. After the white cocoa beans were dry, it will be pack in the large
sacks, which ready to transport by train or send to factory. The employees of
the factory will roast the beans for a while by machine after they arrived to
factory. The bean will be takes out after they has cooled. In the last step, the
outer shell of the bean will remove and crush, then press its inner part liquid
in the machine becomes to chocolate.
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2020년 10월 31일
Oct 31st, 2020 The process of chocolate production is complicate. Chocolate is
makes by cacao tree. Usually the tree is grows in S. America, Africa, and
Indonesia. First, people will remove the red part while the cacao tree is ripe
in the specific time. They put all the white cocoa beans are spread in the sun
to dry. After the white cocoa beans were dry, it will be pack in the large
sacks, which ready to transport by train or send to factory. The employees of
the factory will roast the beans for a while by machine after they arrived to
factory. The bean will be takes out after they has cooled. In the last step, the
outer shell of the bean will remove and crush, then press its inner part liquid
in the machine becomes to chocolate. Hi
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