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Darina
커뮤니티 튜터In the beginning, it is always scaring! Then, when I visit new country, meet nice people, I enjoy my trip. Sometimes, I feel better, when I travel alone. Because, it's freedom, calmness, meditation, getting a lot of new information!!!
2022년 8월 16일 오후 5:28
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In the beginning, it is always scary! Then, when I visit new country and meet nice people, I enjoy my trip. Sometimes I feel better when I travel alone because it's freedom, calmness, meditation and getting a lot of new information!!!
This is a lovely sentiment! I recommend limiting the number of commas you use in a sentence to help improve your text!
2022년 8월 16일
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In the beginning, it is always scary! However, once I visit a new country and meet nice people, then I enjoy my trip. Sometimes I feel better when I travel alone. I feel free and calm, I can meditate and learn a lot of new things!
Well done, Darina.
2022년 8월 16일
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