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Saddam Hussain
There is a very deep relationship between income and happiness. When you have a good income, you will naturally be very happy. Also, with a good income, someone can set his or her life according to his or her choice due to which one can definitely be happy.
2024년 1월 12일 오후 5:50
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HI Saddam! Here are some notes: his or her (fluency) --> English is always changing, especially to follow the changes in society and social expectations and social norms. Now, you can just say they/them/their - this has also been used for a long time when we don't know who the person is exactly. So: - someone can set their life according to their choice..... due to which one can definitely be happy... (?fluency) --> this phrase doesn't make sense, sorry. What do you mean? Maybe: Also, with a good income, someone can set their life according to their choice, based on what makes them happy./according to the way they want to live. Let me know if you have any questions. Cheers! Kae
2024년 1월 16일
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