Chris Huang
We have many choices in our life, how to do is the best depends on our mindset. We have many choices in our life; how to do it best depends on our mindset. We have many choices in our lives, and the best way to decide depends on our mindset. Which one is correct?
2024년 1월 15일 오후 11:30
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We have many choices to make in our life. How best to resolve them depends on our mindset. We often need to select among alternatives in our life. Each time, choosing best depends upon our mindset. We are forced to make many choices in our lives, and how we decide each one depends upon our mindset. Which one is correct?
#2 is ok, but not great because "it" does not refer to anything identifiable. #1 and #3 are confusing. In #1, I ask myself "to do WHAT?". In #3, I ask myself "to decide WHAT?" It is clear in both cases what you intended: how to do the making of choices, and how to decide which choice to make. However, you need to be more clear.
2024년 1월 16일
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We have many choices in our life, how to do is the best depends on our mindset. We have many choices in our life; how to do it best depends on our mindset. We have many choices in our lives, and the best way to decide depends on our mindset. Which one is correct?
We have many choices in our lives, and the best way to decide depends on our mindset.......This is the correct one
2024년 1월 16일
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