Lawrence
The greatest difference between people, I think, is their own cognitive level. When leaving for home during holiday season, I always have conflict with my mother basically on world value. And I understand that we grow up in different social environment, but she always forces me to behave in a way of what she thinks it's right. She always squabbles with me on trials. So I have to find a good job ASAP after graduation and take care of myself with my own salary.
2024년 2월 9일 오전 11:24
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The greatest difference between people, I think, is their own cognitive level. When leaving for home during the holiday season, I always have conflicts with my mother -basically on world values. And I understand that we grew up in different social environments, but she always forces me to behave in a way that she thinks is right. She always squabbles with me on trials?., so I have to find a good job ASAP after graduating and take care of myself with my own salary.
Good! Pay attention to plurals for general statements, and trials is too simple a word - explain what you mean using more words. Thanks!
2024년 2월 9일
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