Yes, we should focus on adults and their relationships this is because relationships are so toxic in this society I think it’s social problem I don’t understand why they are building relationships wit

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Yes, we should focus on adults and their relationships this is because relationships are so toxic in this society I think it’s social problem I don’t understand why they are building relationships with each other.

2024년 2월 12일 오후 3:52

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Yes, we should focus on mature, tangible relationships. This is because some relationships are so toxic in this society. I think it’s a social problem and I don’t understand why we are not building relationships with each other.

2024년 2월 13일

Yes, we should focus on building adult relationships this is because relationships are so toxic in this society, I think it’s a social problem hence I don’t understand why they are not doing more to build relationships with each other.

A bit of some feedback. It was not so easy to follow, I think you should work more on organizing your thoughts so they are more coherent on paper.. However well done for the good effort

2024년 2월 13일

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