Since it’s becoming hot weather recently I turned on the air conditioner while I was sleeping yesterday night so I feel like catch a cold in this morning so I take a bath and drink some hot water now

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Since it’s becoming hot weather recently I turned on the air conditioner while I was sleeping yesterday night so I feel like catch a cold in this morning so I take a bath and drink some hot water now I feel much better to start my wonderful weekend go out and take walk and grab some coffee at coffee shops

2024년 2월 24일 오전 7:36

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Since the weather is becoming hot, I recently turned on the air conditioner for while I was sleeping last night. Now I feel like I have caught a cold this morning, so I took a bath and drank some hot water. Now I am feeling much better to start my wonderful weekend. I am going to go out and take walk and grab some coffee at a coffee shop.

2024년 2월 24일

Since it’s getting hot recently, I turned on the air conditioner while I was sleeping last night. This morning, I feel like I caught a cold, so I took a bath and drank some hot water. Now I feel much better to start my wonderful weekend. I plan to go out to take a walk and grab some coffee at coffee shops.

Hi Miki! I made a few corrections. You used clear vocabulary and the logic was easy to understand. You just struggled with past vs. present tense verbs. I hope you enjoyed your weekend. I also love checking out new coffee shops! Why are you working on English? Is it for study, travel, work, immigration, something else? Take care! Morgan

2024년 2월 29일

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