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Deepak Vishwakarma
My goal I still believe I have reserves of willpower to rise like a phoenix again to crack the interview. I know I have faced failures in turn in all nine attempts.What avails? If you don't try . It is better to get one step closer to this fleeting aim that to seeing the time passing.
2023년 8월 7일 오후 6:52
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Goal Statement: "I firmly believe that I possess untapped reservoirs of willpower that will enable me to emerge triumphantly, much like a phoenix rising from the ashes, and conquer the upcoming interview. Recognizing that I've encountered setbacks throughout all nine of my previous attempts, I remain undeterred. After all, what is the value of not attempting? Progressing even a single step nearer to this evasive objective is of greater consequence than idly watching time elapse."
2023년 8월 7일
I still believe I have reserves of willpower to rise like a phoenix again to master the interview. I know I have faced failures in all nine (successive) attempts. What avails? Nothing if you don't try . It is better to get one step closer to this fleeting aim than to see the time (simply) passing. 'Crack' the interview could work on a technical level. But it's a different kind of jargon than your other words, more informal. 'In turn' could go at the end of the sentence. It doesn't really add anything here though.
2023년 8월 8일
My goal I still believe I have reserves of willpower to rise like a phoenix again to crack the interview. I know I have faced failures in turn in all nine attempts.What avails? If you don't try . It is better to get one step closer to this fleeting aim that to seeing the time passing.
Thank you Gilgy.
2023년 8월 8일
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