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Hi, it’s been a while. I really want to travel abroad recently. The place I want to visit the most is Northern Europe, especially Finland. I want to go there because the city is stylish, and there are many cute shops. Also, the atmosphere is peaceful and close to nature, which I really like.
Finland is also known as the country where Santa Clause lives. In winter, you can meet him there! Since Christmas is my favorite event of the year, I want to visit there and see him. It is one of my dream rest of my life. To make this dream come true, I’m working hard at my part time job now. I don’t know if I can do it while I’m still a student, but having a goal makes my work meaningful. I will have the best experience in my life. One day, I want to look back and say, I did it!
2025년 11월 3일 오전 9:02
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Hi, it’s been a while. I have really wanted to travel abroad recently. The place I want
to visit the most is Northern Europe, especially Finland. I want to go there
because the city (which city?) is stylish, and there are many cute shops. Also, the atmosphere
is peaceful and close to nature, which I really like. Finland is also known as
the country where Santa Claus lives. In winter, you can meet him there! Since
Christmas is my favourite event of the year, I want to visit there and see him.
It is one of my dreams/things on my wish list/bucket list. To make this dream come true, I’m working
hard at my part time job now. I don’t know if I can do it while I’m still a
student, but having a goal makes my work meaningful. I will have the best
experience of my life. One day, I want to look back and say, I did it!
Well done. A lovely piece of writing :)
2025년 11월 3일 오전 9:34
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