Yui
I had a dinner with my best friend in Yokohama today. We enjoyed small talk and made a plan for the next winter trip. We are going to travel to Isawa-onsen in Yamanashi. I can’t wait it. Anyway, I'm looking forward to seeing her again next week. See you next week my buddy!
2022년 11월 30일 오후 12:55
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I had dinner with my best friend in Yokohama today. We enjoyed making small talk and made a plan for the next winter trip. We are planning to travel to Isawa-onsen in Yamanashi. I can’t wait. Anyway, I'm looking forward to seeing her again next week. See you next week my buddy!
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2022년 11월 30일
I had a dinner with my best friend in Yokohama today. We enjoyed small talk and
made a plan for the next winter trip. We are going to travel to Isawa-onsen in
Yamanashi. I can’t wait. Anyway, I'm looking forward to seeing her again next
week. See you next week my buddy!
Looks great!
2022년 11월 30일
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