Search from various 영어 teachers...
The Tim じぁん!!!
It’s sunny and windy today. In the morning, I went jogging as usual. As expected, my dad lounged on a step holding his coffee all the time. Occasionally he changed his spot to sun himself or just simply to stay out of the wind. Just like what a giant chubby Persian cat would do. The park was nearly deserted with only us and two or three other kids around. They were playing with mud on sticks, super filthy and annoying. Surprisingly they chased after me for a short while with no reason, without greeting, surely I ran off. Why on earth have they played with mud?
2022년 12월 10일 오전 8:44
교정 · 2
1
It’s sunny and windy today. In the morning, I went jogging as usual. As expected, my dad lounged on a step just holding his coffee. Occasionally he changed his spot to sun himself (good! Lol) or just simply to stay out of the wind. Just like what a giant chubby Persian cat would do. The park was nearly deserted with only us and two or three other kids around. They were playing with mud on sticks, super filthy and annoying. Surprisingly they chased after me for a short while with no reason, without even saying hello. As you might expect, I ran off. Why on earth were they playing with mud?
Just a few changes to make it more natural.
2022년 12월 10일
더 빨리 진행하고 싶나요?
이 학습 커뮤니티에 참여하고 무료로 연습해보세요!

집에서 편안하게 언어를 배울 수 있는 기회를 놓치지 마세요. 경험 많은 강사진을 살펴보고 지금 바로 첫 수업을 신청하세요!