Molly
Today, my family woke late and my kids were late for school. When my daughter approached the school gate, there were also 3 students more late for school. I think because the weather was turning cooler and became cold today so people slept too well in there cozy blankets. I am having a cup of coffee which my husband made for me while I am on Italki. Today is Valentine's day and I want to say, I love Italkiers so much! Happy Valentine's Day!
2023년 2월 14일 오전 2:02
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Today, my family woke up late and my kids were late for school. When my daughter approached the school gate, there were 3 other students that were also late for school. The weather was turning / getting cooler and that’s why people slept so well in their cozy blankets. I am having a cup of coffee (which) my husband made for me while I was chatting on Italki. Today is Valentine’s Day and I want to say, I love Italkiers so much! Happy Valentine's Day!
2023년 2월 14일
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Today, my family woke up late and my kids were late for school. When my daughter approached the school gate, there were 3 other students who were also late for school. I think that, because the weather is turning cooler, everyone slept too well in their cozy blankets. I am having a cup of coffee which my husband made for me while I am on Italki. Today is Valentine's day and I want to say, I love Italkiers so much! Happy Valentine's Day!
2023년 2월 14일
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Today, my family woke late and my kids were late for school. When my daughter approached the school gate, there were also 3 students more late for school. I think because the weather was turning cooler and became cold today so people slept too well in there cozy blankets. I am having a cup of coffee which my husband made for me while I am on Italki. Today is Valentine's day and I want to say, I love Italkiers so much! Happy Valentine's Day! “…their cozy blankets.” (It sounds like “there” which is a place; but “their” is plural possession. You did a great job)
2023년 2월 14일
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