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Hello everyone.
Today, I went to Koenji, Tokyo with my brother to shop clothes. My brother has much knowledge about the clothes, so he taught me what clothes I should purchase. I was very worried about what to purchase but thanks to him, I could bought them that I wanted to purchase. I appreciate him to teach me a lot of important things. I’ll try to do my best to acquire much knowledge about clothes from now on.
2021년 7월 3일 오전 6:07
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Hello everyone.
Today, I went to Koenji in Tokyo with my brother to shop for clothes. My brother has a lot of knowledge about clothes, so he taught me what clothes I should purchase. I was anxious about not knowing what to purchase, but thanks to him, I bought what I wanted. I appreciate him for teaching me a lot of important things. I’ll try my best to acquire more knowledge about clothes from now on.
You are so blessed to have a brother who can give you shopping tips! I often get overwhelmed when shopping for clothes and need my best friend to tag along and give me opinions.
Note: Try to avoid saying "much knowledge" as people don't often say that. Instead, use "a lot of" in replacement of "much"
2021년 7월 3일
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