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Could you help me to check the grammar? Are there sentences wired? Anything I need to improve? Thank u The staff didn't carry out confirmation that component of 10PCS during operations. And he also didn't follow the SOP to carry out routine operations. Thus, the product was scrapped. In the same day, he still not checked the component of 2PCS carefully cause the product was not conformed the specification in another operating. At the same time, he didn't inform the situation and he intentionally failed to follow the SOP to complete the product. The product was scrapped as well. Thus,the staff who causes loss to the company by his negligence and intentionally.
2022년 7월 27일 오후 12:29
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Could you help me to check the grammar? Are there sentences wired? Anything I need to improve? Thank u The staff member didn't carry out the confirmation of the component of the 10PCS during operations. Also, he also didn't follow the SOP to carry out routine operations. Thus, the product was scrapped. On the same day, he still didn't check the component of the 2PCS carefully because the product was not confirmed in the specification in another operation. At the same time, he didn't inform anyone about the situation and he intentionally failed to follow the SOP to complete the product. The product was scrapped as well. Thus, the staff member intentionally caused a loss to the company due to his negligence.
2022년 7월 28일
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2022년 7월 27일
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