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The Setsubun Festival is held on February 3rd. 2月3日は節分です。 On this day, it involves a tradition of throwing dried soy beans. この日には、大豆をまく習慣があります。 t's called “mame-maki”. People scatter beans to drive away evil and bring in good luck. 「豆まき」と言って、邪悪なものを祓い、福を招くために豆をまきます。 However, that event is becoming a problem for society because it lets the food go to waste. しかし豆をまくことは、食品を無駄にしていると問題になっています。 Therefore, it's done in a way that doesn't go to waste recently. だから最近では、無駄にならない方法で行われいます。
2022년 2월 3일 오후 9:33
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The Setsubun Festival is held on February 3rd. 2月3日は節分です。 On this day, it involves a tradition of throwing dried soy beans. この日には、豆をまく習慣があります。 t's called “mame-maki”. People scatter beans to drive away evil and bring in good luck. 「豆まき」と言って、邪悪なものを祓い、福を招くために豆をまきます。 However, that event is becoming a problem for society because it lets the food go to waste. しかし豆をまくことは、食品を無駄にしていると問題になっています。 Therefore, it's done in a way that doesn't go to waste recently. だから最近では、無駄にならないように工夫した方法で行われています。
It’s really great job! You can check grammar point for using "youni." It's sounds more natural.
2022년 2월 4일
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