pan
Today, I played the electronic organ after a long time. It’s been a long time, so I was sad that I couldn’t play it very well. But after all, playing is fun and I love it! After this, I plan to do my homework and go to bed early.
Thank you for reading.
2025년 4월 20일 오전 10:22
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Today, I played the electronic organ for the first time in ages. It’s been a long time,
so I was sad that I couldn’t play it very well. But after all, playing is fun
and I love it! After this, I plan to do my homework and go to bed early. Thank
you for reading.
2025년 4월 20일 오후 1:32
Today, I played the electronic organ after a long time. It has been a while, so I was sad that I couldn’t play it very well. But after all, playing is fun, and I love it! After this, I plan to do my homework and go to bed early. Thank you for reading.
Hi Pan! It’s great to hear that you played the electronic organ again! You expressed your feelings about not playing well and your love for music very clearly, which makes your writing relatable. For improvement, focus on using more varied sentence structures to add interest. Keep enjoying your music and good luck with your homework!
2025년 4월 20일 오후 8:28
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