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The day before Christmas, I went to a Christmas café in Shin-Okubo with my friends. The café was very famous, so there were many high school students and couples. Because of that, we had to wait in a long line for a long time. I felt very tired while waiting. However, when we finally entered the café, my feelings changed. Inside the café, there were many cute foods and beautiful Christmas decorations. The cakes and drinks were colorful and looked very nice. The decorations made me feel excited and happy. I really enjoyed the Christmas atmosphere there. Even though I was tired, I thought it was worth waiting. I want to visit the café again next year. On Christmas Day, I went to Costco with my university friends. We bought many kinds of food, such as pizza, chicken, and desserts. After shopping, we went to my friend’s house and had a Christmas party. We cooked and prepared a lot of food together, so the room was full of delicious smells. I ate a lot, and I became very full. We also wore Santa Claus and reindeer headbands. It made us feel more like Christmas. We took many pictures and talked a lot. I had a very fun and happy Christmas with my friends. It became a great memory for me.
2025년 12월 31일 오전 5:50
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The day before Christmas, I went to a Christmas café in Shin-Okubo with my friends. The café is very famous, so there were many high school students and couples. Because of that, we had to wait in a long line for quite a long time. I felt very tired while waiting. However, when we finally entered the café, my feelings changed. Inside the café, there were many cute desserts and beautiful Christmas decorations. The cakes and drinks were colorful and looked very nice. The decorations made me feel excited and happy. I really enjoyed the Christmas atmosphere there. Even though I was tired, I thought it was worth waiting. I want to visit the café again next year. On Christmas Day, I went to Costco with my university friends. We bought many kinds of food, such as pizza, chicken, and desserts. After shopping, we went to my friend’s house and had a Christmas party. We cooked and prepared a lot of food together, so the room was filled with delicious aroma. I ate a lot, and I was very full. We also wore Santa Claus and reindeer headbands. It made us feel even more like it was Christmas. We took many pictures and talked a lot. I had a very fun and happy Christmas with my friends. It became a great memory for me.
2026년 1월 3일 오후 1:23
The day before Christmas, I went to a Christmas café in Shin-Okubo with my friends. The café was very famous, so there were many high school students and couples. Because of that, we had to wait in a long line for a long time. I felt very tired while waiting. However, when we finally entered the café, my feelings changed. Inside the café, there were many cute foods and beautiful Christmas decorations. The cakes and drinks were colorful and looked very nice. The decorations made me feel excited and happy. I really enjoyed the Christmas atmosphere there. Even though I was tired, I thought it was worth waiting. I want to visit the café again next year. On Christmas Day, I went to Costco with my university friends. We bought many kinds of food, such as pizza, chicken, and desserts. After shopping, we went to my friend’s house and had a Christmas party. We cooked and prepared a lot of food together, so the room was full of delicious smells. I ate a lot, and I became very full. We also wore Santa Claus and reindeer headbands. It made us feel more like Christmas. We took many pictures and talked a lot. I had a very fun and happy Christmas with my friends. It became a great memory for me.
Very well written, well done. I would change some small sentences to be more natural: It (the Santa clause and reindeer headband) made it (the party) feel more like Christmas. I had a lot of fun and a happy Christmas
2026년 1월 2일 오후 1:07
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