Usually, on Saturday, I remain very busy in different stuff, and I try to complete all of the necessary tasks on that day, and then on Sunday, I try to relax and enjoy the day.

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Saddam Hussain

2023년 9월 19일 오후 5:59

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초대받은 사람

On Saturday, I try to complete all my tasks so that on Sunday, I may relax and enjoy the day.

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2023년 9월 21일

초대받은 사람

Usually, on Saturday, I remain very busy in different stuff, and I try to complete all of the necessary tasks on that day, and then on Sunday, I try to relax and enjoy the day.

The grammar in the original is all correct, but some of the vocabulary sounds awkward or too formal. This is a more correct version: Usually, on Saturday, I am very busy with different things, and I try to do everything that's necessary on that day, and then on Sunday, I try to relax and enjoy the day.

2023년 9월 19일

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